•Sea of Tears•
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I would walk 5 million miles
just to fall right at your feet.
My back could ache. I could
fall apart, but my heart would
skip a beat.
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If you asked me for a ray of
light, I’d bottle up the sun.
There would be endless night
and starry eyes until you
decided you were done.
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I would drink of skull and
bones, if I had one last request.
My throat may close. My pulse
would grow weak, but I’d put
this body to the test.
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If you asked me for an ocean
view, I would cry a sea of
tears. My well would dry, but
I could use the waves to
whisper right into your ear.
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I would run 5 hours straight
to peep into your thoughts.
My feet would ache. I may fall
apart, but that’s just what it
is I sought.
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by Felicia Lujan
1.16.2013
January 18, 2013 at 2:34 AM
Now, that’s a love poem. Impressive work, Felicia.
January 20, 2013 at 10:03 AM
OMGssshhhh Felish, I love this poem–I felt every single word!!!
February 20, 2013 at 10:38 PM
Thanks Mar— only you would truly appreciate it!
Luv- Felish
January 20, 2013 at 9:12 PM
This is very very stunning ~ can feel the intensity and emotion. Thank you!! ~RL
February 20, 2013 at 10:40 PM
Thank you Robyn- I am so glad that you could feel it! That means that I did a good job capturing my emotions, in turn capturing an audience! Thanks for the visit!
Keep feelin’
Felicia
January 22, 2013 at 12:43 PM
This is tight! A very immersing poem indeed. Such talent you have. Thank you for sharing your gift.
February 20, 2013 at 10:46 PM
Thanks Yahobahne– I love that! I am so happy you called said it’s “tight!” Awesome! Poetry allows me to convey the corners of my mind I would dare not venture into in the real world! Thanks for the visit!
Felicia
February 22, 2013 at 4:01 PM
You’re welcome. Stop by sometime, pull up a chair, relax and peruse. 😊
January 22, 2013 at 10:58 PM
Excellent poem. Very deep and beautifully written
February 20, 2013 at 10:47 PM
Thank you Les— that one touched many women! I love that. I did my job with regard to the sea within! Thanks for the visit and lovely comment!
Felicia
January 23, 2013 at 6:05 PM
Good poem, Felicia, very close to my heart also, the theme of love.
Thanks for visiting my site and for your enthusiasm about my posts.
Cheers!
February 20, 2013 at 10:50 PM
Thanks Felicia– from one poet to another– it is so important for us to spill our souls! I appreciate your comment, that you liked the piece, and that I really dig your name! Haha…
Felicia
April 13, 2013 at 11:03 AM
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