~Undone~

~Undone~
Original poem and digital composite
featuring a corset by Felicia Lujan.

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Liberate my painted~ moonlit soul

unlace an ocean and the deep.

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Release the bosom~ pull on strings

untie the knots while I’m asleep.

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Loosen a strand of needless time

undo the need to have a key.

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Open me up~ corsets breed the weak

unfasten these ties and let me see.

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Alter the fit and change the mold

I will promise to deflect the sun.

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Free the wings secured by twine

for it is time to come undone.

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by Felicia Lujan

October 14, 2012

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13 Comments on “~Undone~”


  1. This post made me think of this. Should be the theme song for this post.


  2. This speaks to the soul of all of us

  3. lizziejoy10 Says:

    A beautiful poem that speaks to my heart. Blessings.


  4. Very nice. Written by a great person and any person should live by this.

    Do you twitter? I’d love to exchange writing and feedback sometimes.

    Regards,

    Daan van den Bergh

  5. rommel Says:

    Very nice one, flujan.


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